How I Wrote More Fiction in 2016 than In Any Other Year (Despite Two Small Children)

9 Jan 2017 | Time

Ali's writing retreat: photo shows her laptop, notebook and mug of tea.

I finished two full drafts of my novel, the third Lycopolis book, by mid-November 2016 … the most fiction I’ve ever written in a year.

This is despite 2016 being a pretty hectic year, with two small children, limited work hours, and fiction-writing being squeezed into a 30 minute slot most days.

During 2016, I wrote more fiction than I did:

  • When I was in school, with hours to spare every day … and plenty of time at the weekends.
  • When I was a uni student with 28 weeks vacation per year (yes, 28!) – I did work some of that time, but I had oodles of hours where I could’ve been writing and didn’t.
  • When I was working full-time, and had no dependents. (Weekdays were busy – but I could’ve written much more at weekends than I did.)
  • When I was taking a part-time degree in creative writing. I wrote a fair amount of fiction at this point – more rapidly than in the past – but still not as much as a I wrote during 2016.

So what changed?

Fiction Became a Consistent Priority

In past years, I often binge-wrote: I’d spend a few days focused on my novel, only to stop when life got busy … and I wouldn’t go back to it for weeks or months.

In 2016, fiction was a much more consistent priority for me. It was rare that I had a whole day to write (I did a day retreat in March and an overnight hotel stay in November to focus on my novel) … but I wrote most weekdays all year.

I found this helped me keep up the momentum: in the past, when I’ve had long breaks from writing, it’s been hard to get back into the story and pick up where I left off.

Parenting Forced Me to Become More Productive

I know I’m not the first parent to notice this: once you have kids, you are forced to get better at getting things done, because there’s simply so much to do! As Hannah Booth puts it in her Guardian article How to write a novel this year:

Unfilled hours are notably scarce, which lends them a preciousness. As a result, I am profoundly productive: in a single, rare hour to myself, I can shower, run to the supermarket, make two phone calls, pay a bill online and cook lunch. This has spurred me into action: after years of procrastination, I want to start writing.

My Writing Time was Scheduled In

This is, I think, what made the biggest difference. I set my writing time as 5.15pm – 5.45pm (this fits neatly between the kids teatime and running their bath!) – a time of day when my husband was almost always home from his PhD office and ready to take over looking after the kids.

Having this time set aside for writing meant that despite being busy, I wrote. If I’d instead told myself that “I’ll write when I have time,” I’d probably have written all of ten words this year. 😉

Since making scheduled writing sessions a regular part of my week, I’ve found that Mark McGuiness, author of Productivity for Creative People and Cal Newport, author of Deep Work both highly recommend it.

My Writing Sessions were Short

This might sound rather counter-intuitive: surely I’d have written more if I’d had longer writing sessions?

In the past, I always thought I needed several hours at a stretch to write – or at least a full hour. I’d tried writing in short daily blocks and it made me feel frustrated: I preferred having two or three long weekly sessions.

Over the past few years, though, I’ve got the hang of writing in short sessions. It’s much easier to focus when you know you only have 30 minutes … and while it can be frustrating to stop after only making a bit of progress through a scene, it’s rewarding to watch the novel progress quickly over the course of a few weeks.

Writing Became Something to Look Forward To

While I’ve always enjoyed writing, life with two small children involves an awful lot of fairly mundane tasks: dressing, bathing, feeding, clearing up (as well as some more fun bits, like playing and reading stories).

My writing time became a treat: something to look forward to at the end of the day. It was a much-needed bit of time alone with my own thoughts – with something to show for my work other than a (temporarily) clean floor or clean child!

My Laptop Wasn’t Connected to the Internet (Mostly)

I wrote at the top of our house, where my rather feeble laptop can’t connect to the wifi. Perhaps unsurprisingly, I found my writing sessions were far more focused and productive when I didn’t plug my laptop into the ethernet cable, but instead left it entirely internet-free!

What Could You Do to Make 2017 Your Year?

If you’re determined to write more fiction in 2017 than in 2016 … or more fiction than you ever have before! … then try some of these:

Take your writing seriously. Don’t see it as something trivial that can be shunted aside for more “important” things. And don’t tell yourself it’s something that you can only indulge in once all your “proper” work / chores are done.

Schedule your writing time. If you can, put this in between two other commitments in your day, so you’ve got a natural start and end point. For instance, you might choose to write between taking a shower and going out to work, or during your lunch break, or as soon as you get home from work and before cooking dinner.

Improve your writing environment. For me, that usually means writing in a full-screen mode to avoid distractions, and switching off the internet altogether! You might also try getting out to a local library or coffee shop, if family / household demands tend to distract you at home.

If you want to write a novel around the demands of a busy life, check out Your Two-Year Plan for Writing, Editing and Publishing Your Novel: there’s a quick-start version plus a detailed blog post there, and you can even download an in-depth .pdf if you want further help. You only need 3 – 4 hours per week (around 30 minutes per day, or 15 minutes every morning and evening) to create a finished, polished novel in two years.

Pop a comment below to tell me what YOU will do in 2017 to write more than ever before (or what you’ll do to keep up your output, if you’re already writing a lot) – I’d love to hear about your plans.

And … if you’ve got kids of any age (or care for kids, are planning kids, etc…) then check out my Parent-Writers Support Group on Facebook. It’s totally free, and a great place to get help, encouragement and practical tips from other people who’re facing the same challenges as you. It’s a closed group (so we can chat privately), which means you may need to wait for a few hours for me to approve your membership.


I’m Ali Luke, and I live in Leeds in the UK with my husband and two children.

Aliventures is where I help you master the art, craft and business of writing.

My Novels

My contemporary fantasy trilogy is available from Amazon. The books follow on from one another, so read Lycopolis first.

You can buy them all from Amazon, or read them FREE in Kindle Unlimited.


  1. Jacqui McNish

    I found this really helpful. Thank you Ali

    • Ali

      Thanks, Jacqui! 🙂

  2. Claudia Lake

    Loved reading about how you squeeze writing into you day, daily. I began writing a blog in the last quarter of 2016, and that has helped me to focus on my writing practise. Have not got to fiction yet, but one has to start somewhere, right? Thank you for yours.

    • Claudia Lake

      If you are interested my blog can be found at:
      Thanks again for your very helpful suggestions. C.L.

      • Ali

        Thanks, Claudia! I think blogging is a great place to begin building a regular writing habit. (And, of course, it can be a perfectly good end in itself … though I know a number of bloggers who’ve later moved on to fiction, or who want to write fiction!)

  3. Colin Dunbar

    Great post, Ali. Thank you for sharing “direct from the trenches”.

  4. Richard Carter

    I’m guilty of all your past wonderful ideas to get more done. I think we eventually find just the right way just the right times. My first book was in 1976 and sold great and then I believed I was doing something illegal but that was then it took 30 years to find out my lawyers and the judge lied to me. The most unusual series of events.

    I nevertheless did tens of thousands of words in writing for advertising copy book reports for friends short stories for friends and lots of other things.When I discovered that I got lied to and bamboozled it made me bitter for awhile. But it’s no way to move forward,

    I still find more excuses but believe in 2017 it’ll work much better!

    Most important part for me I think will be sitting down once a day to write at least one point or paragraph or whatever three minutes 30 minutes. Sometimes it’s gone into over an hour. Most importantly not putting myself down if I miss something and I’m not perfect (I am I know) and then beat myself up for it! I have to think that I have better books having longer times to think about it– I don’t necessarily believe that but it helps! I wish us all fun and successes for 2017 and most importantly good health! God bless, Rick

    • Ali

      I think we all find excuses — and sometimes it is very tough to sit down and write. I think sitting down once a day to write something, however little (or however much!) is a great way to make steady progress. Good luck and best wishes for 2017!

  5. Emily

    I am posting this to the wall of my studio! I have a toddler, and I have become more productive and passionate about writing since he was born, because everything is more meaningful now. However, I don’t have strategy. Thank you for this!

    • Ali

      You’re very welcome, so glad it was helpful! It’s not easy carving out the time, hope some of these suggestions work for you. 🙂

      Since writing this, I’ve also started a parent-writer support group on Facebook, if you’re interested!

  6. Nadia

    Hi Ali,

    Loved this article – especially the way your offer tangible, realistic examples of how to make writing a daily habit, rather than just abstract “write more” advice which isn’t so sustainable – Thank you! Every week we do a round-up of the best articles we’ve read on a subject related to writing – this week’s is motherhood & creativity, and we’ve shared your article in the list on our blog. Really happy to have discovered your blog – it’s an inspiring place! Best wishes

    • Ali

      Aw, thanks Nadia, I hugely appreciate the link! 🙂 I’m fond of practical advice — nothing wrong with the sentiment behind “write more”, but it’s a bit too vague to be helpful!

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